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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Sun May 18, 2008 2:07 pm
Jayn could just barely breathe.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Sun May 18, 2008 2:11 pm
shadow put jayn on the ground. "get out of here before i send you to the mistical cave." shadow's voice was grouchy and mad. (im drunk! YAY! jk jk. )
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Sun May 18, 2008 2:14 pm
Jayn looked up, blood on his neck. When Shadow let go, he growled, but the noise sharply cut of near the end.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Sun May 18, 2008 2:27 pm
'sometimes you just have to give in bro. just give it up and go heal. dont be a dofis." (no offence ment river.)
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Sun May 18, 2008 2:40 pm
It was too late... in a matter of seconds Jayn would be dead.
Would you mind if I hurt you Understand that I need to Wish that I had other choices Than to harm the one I love
What have you done now
I know I'd better stop trying You know that there's no denying I won't show mercy on you now
I know I should stop believing I know that there's no retrieving It's over now What have you done
What have you done now
I, I've been waiting for someone like you But now you are slipping away What have you done now Why, Why does fate make us suffer There's a curse between us Between me and you
What have you done What have you done What have you done What have you done What have you done now What have you done What have you done What have you done What have you done What have you done now
Would you mind if I killed you Would you mind if I tried to
Cause you have turned into my worst enemy You carry hate that I feel It's over now What have you done
What have you done now
I, I've been waiting for someone like you But now you are slipping away What have you done now Why, Why does fate make us suffer There's a curse between us Between me and you
What have you done What have you done What have you done What have you done What have you done now What have you done What have you done What have you done What have you done What have you done now
I will not fall Won't let it go We will be free When it ends
I, I've been waiting for someone like you But now you are slipping away What have you done now Why, Why does fate make us suffer There's a curse between us Between me and you
I, I've been waiting for someone like you But now you are slipping away What have you done now Why, Why does fate make us suffer There's a curse between us Between me and you
(obviously, the song doesn't fit perfectly, as Jayn HATES Shadow, not loves him(that would be creepy ), but it works fine.)
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Sun May 18, 2008 3:15 pm
shadow saw this and was full of mercy for the being.... he couldnt help but find some odd looking golden berrys and give them to jayn. he didnt know they were rare life berrys.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Sun May 18, 2008 3:24 pm
Jayn coughed painfully and blood bubbled out.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Sun May 18, 2008 3:56 pm
(those are LIFE BERRYS! they is suppose to save his life! thats why they called life berrys. )
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Sun May 18, 2008 4:01 pm
Jayn's claws scratched on the ground.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Sun May 18, 2008 4:03 pm
shadow licked jayn's neck to get rid of the miscitoes that gatherd on his cut neck.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Sun May 18, 2008 4:12 pm
Jayn moved away frantically.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Sun May 18, 2008 4:17 pm
shadow grabed his scruff aand gently pulled him back and got back to licking his wound. they looked like 2 brothers that one had just tought a lesson to and was cleaning the wounds he had to make and the other was scared of the older one.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Sun May 18, 2008 4:27 pm
Jayn's mind finally filled with a red haze, and a few minutes later, his body lay limb, unmoving, growing colder.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Sun May 18, 2008 4:29 pm
shadow make the body eat the berrys again. they did their magic and got jayn's heart pumping again!
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Sun May 18, 2008 4:33 pm
Jayn looked up weakly."What? Do you want to kill me again?"
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Mon May 19, 2008 3:51 am
"remember he tried to kill you before. be careful" Kaze said to Shadow.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Mon May 19, 2008 3:50 pm
Jayn's head fell to the ground, as if he didn't have the strength to keep it up longer.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Mon May 19, 2008 4:02 pm
shadow sighed and put jayn on his back and took him to his little hide out den. he had herbs hanging there and he gave jayn some for strangth,life, and recovory. "now you stay here and sleep. I'll go get a here or a elk."
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Mon May 19, 2008 4:15 pm
Jayn let out a weak growl.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Mon May 19, 2008 4:28 pm
"chill. your safe. i wouldnt hurt you anymore then that anyway. much less kill you." shadow took off and saw a waek old elk practicly praying to die. shadow flew down and walked up to it. "please be kind to this old elk and put me down. i would rather die feeding a hugry creture like you then of old age.""as you wish fair elk. i hope you had a good life." "oh it was wonderful, thank you for asking." shadow bit the old elk and killed it quick and painlessly so the poor thing wouldnt have to suffer. he started to fly back to Jayn with the elk.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Mon May 19, 2008 4:32 pm
Jayn closed his eyes.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Mon May 19, 2008 4:41 pm
shadow started to sawy with the wiaght of the elk. he speed up and shot to the hideout. he saw that jayn was sleeping so he slowly crept in and put the best part of the elk next to him and went outside to eat as well.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Mon May 19, 2008 4:46 pm
Jayn slept knowing that he might not wake up.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Mon May 19, 2008 5:20 pm
shadow had finished and saw that jayn wasnt breathing very well... he took emergncy action and did CPR on him. it work! jayn was breathing full and healthy breaths now! shadow sighed of releaf and relaxed.
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Subject: Re: Bloody Fangs Mon May 19, 2008 5:22 pm
Jayn mumbled.'If I have to die, I wish he would just let me die.'
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